Last “read more” for today, guys, I promise.
I clearly will not regret THIS, later on!*
All of those bubbles should be swirling fish, rather than quickly blurbed blobs.
Excellent idea, Myself, that whole “immerse yourself in something difficult” thing, A+.
*I have already intimidated the hell out of myself, but the decision has been made! If it takes a long time, it takes a long time.